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Maiden Desmodus - Short Story "The Coming of the Ashmodus"
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02-20-2010, 02:15 AM
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Re: Maiden Desmodus - Short Story "The Coming of the Ashmodus"
You shouldn't make every sentence it's own chapter. It's nasty to read that way. Why not combine the sentences and make it a proper chapter?
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